This is a good story because it deals with the safety of children in the community. I personally think that you could have gone into more detail with what happened to the children after they were found.
The title definitely caught my attention. Such a horrible story! Very good information given without giving too much away! Makes me want to read more about this!
The title immediately caught my attention! Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story because it deals with the safety of children in the community. I personally think that you could have gone into more detail with what happened to the children after they were found.
ReplyDeleteThe title definitely caught my attention. Such a horrible story! Very good information given without giving too much away! Makes me want to read more about this!
ReplyDeleteSad story and i am glad they got arrested. Great story and lead.
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