Great minds think alike, I didn't know we were covering the same story. However, I like your approach on this story. You covered more details and showed different elements of the report. Clear voice, and content.
I agree, Cynthia!
You have a good beginning of the story, and also gave enough details.
Very informative with great use of quotes, the flow was good too.
Great minds think alike, I didn't know we were covering the same story. However, I like your approach on this story. You covered more details and showed different elements of the report. Clear voice, and content.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Cynthia!
DeleteYou have a good beginning of the story, and also gave enough details.
ReplyDeleteVery informative with great use of quotes, the flow was good too.
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