I think you did a really great job organizing your information and relaying it in a way that would matter to the reader. I read this story yesterday on CNN and I like the way you read it and organized much better. Great work!
The story is organized very well, i also like your start.
I think you did a really great job organizing your information and relaying it in a way that would matter to the reader. I read this story yesterday on CNN and I like the way you read it and organized much better. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThe story is organized very well, i also like your start.
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