Great flow to your story, excellent use of details to help tell the story, great job of simply telling the story!
I agree with Brandon. I like the flow of the story and how you were able to get the details across but covered a base of what happened. Your voice is clear and the story is to the point. Good job!
Great flow to your story, excellent use of details to help tell the story, great job of simply telling the story!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Brandon. I like the flow of the story and how you were able to get the details across but covered a base of what happened. Your voice is clear and the story is to the point. Good job!
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