Strong and catchy lead. I lovely picture.
Your lead was awesome, and your ending was good as well.
Very good job of giving many details without overwhelming the listener! Your ending was awesome!
I really like the title and I was really intrigued throughout the story.
Great job speaking through out the story! Your voice was clear and understandable which made me want to keep listening!
Strong and catchy lead. I lovely picture.
ReplyDeleteYour lead was awesome, and your ending was good as well.
ReplyDeleteVery good job of giving many details without overwhelming the listener! Your ending was awesome!
ReplyDeleteI really like the title and I was really intrigued throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteGreat job speaking through out the story! Your voice was clear and understandable which made me want to keep listening!
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