Good Introduction, I understood this story. Catchy lead.
Your headline was very vivid, it gave me a great mental image! This is something that is close to my heart, as I attended the march last year! Great job!
This is great! I think the Duggars and their fleet of 100 children were there too! Love the story!
Good Introduction, I understood this story. Catchy lead.
ReplyDeleteYour headline was very vivid, it gave me a great mental image! This is something that is close to my heart, as I attended the march last year! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is great! I think the Duggars and their fleet of 100 children were there too! Love the story!
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