Monday, January 26, 2015

ISIS murders yet another hostage

Nicole Schulenburg CNN.com
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2015 at 3:47 PM

    I like your content, but I would go in with a stronger lead.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2015 at 6:51 AM

    Very hard-hitting story idea and your delivery was good; your lead could use some stronger verbs to grab the audience's attention.

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